Is This a Good Thesis?

Question by Eddy: Is this a good thesis?
“Gambling is an addiction that causes people to become frustrated and gets people into debts which may lead to broken relationships and suicides” if this is not a good thesis can you give me a better thesis. my essay is based on addiction from gambling

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Answer by SithariChick
“Gambling is an addiction that can lead people into dept, broken relationships, and even suicide” would be a better toned down thesis but still thesis are supposed to be short and to the point so something like “Gambling is an addiction that can ruin peoples lives” is probably your best bet. The topics of your body paragraphs can be suicide, broken relationships, debts, ext.

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